Friday, August 14, 2020

my animal report



I was learning to write a report. We had the choice pick out of a tik tok report or a fortnight report or and animal report I choose a animal report because I would have liked to learn about an animal. I found it easy to find facts. I found it hard to make make my paragraphs long. Next time I will try and find more facts to write about the blue whale.   

2 comments:

  1. Wow I learnt a lot off that and there tongues must be huge and I never know they sleeped vertical that's really weird. Have you ever seen a whale?

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  2. Kia ora. My name is Navani and I attend Mangapapa school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. I liked this piece of learning because it was detailed and was full of facts about the Blue Whale. Your picture of the whale really captures all of the features of the Blue Whale and how they can move in the water. Next time maybe look back and put punctuation in the right spaces because people who read this might not have enough breath to go for all of slide 3 because there are no full stops anywhere on that slide?

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