Fireworks Poem

 

We were learning to use onomatopoeia in our writing to describe what the sounds were we were also writing about fireworks to use onomatopoeia in our writing .

I found this easy because I have seen lots of firework shows so it was easy to picture them so I could add more description to my writing. 

I found this hard because I didn't know how to capture the art that is fireworks in my writing.

Next time I need to think about what I am adding to the page so that it makes sense. 

I was a whaiwhakaro/thinker because I thought about the vocabulary in my writing.