Diving Giraffes

 

we were learning to write in good detail because Mrs Hall showed us a video of diving giraffes and we could work with  partner and I choose Shannon and we had to use good onomatopoeia alliteration good verbs and adjectives and make sure our writing is level three.

I found it easy to work with shannon because we have the same kind of our ideas and we always work rally well together and i found it easy to use good level three writing 

I found it hard to think of good ways to describes how the giraffes move and acted.